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Key/cirtical detail from the letter"…I discovered that your (assorted flavoured) condoms are actually labelled however in the same place as the dispatch codes and expiry date…"

Key/cirtical detail from the letter
"…I discovered that your (assorted flavoured) condoms are actually labelled however in the same place as the dispatch codes and expiry date…"

10:22 pm: lisakura

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10:21 pm: lisakura

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The Letter

Dear Marquis Condoms Ltd;

I’m not a fussy person when it comes to condoms and I have nothing against your actual product. But I recently purchased a box of your assorted flavoured condoms and it has come to my attention that your bright orange packaging just isn’t good enough. The other night when I opened the box I was rather disappointed. Not only is the Bright orange boring but also it is hard to tell what flavour each condom is. Here I am in a rush looking through each condom looking for the flavour indication. Needless to say I was in a state to care and just opened anyone.

For a while I believed that your Assorted flavoured condoms were just at random, only recently as I was making a comparison of different condom brands that I discovered that your condoms are actually labelled however in the same place as the dispatch codes and expiry date. Not to mention I had to have a very close inspection and had gone through them countless of times. Well that is pretty much all I’ve got to complain about it was a frustrating experience.

My suggestion to you is to have a look at other brands and see how they print their packaging. I suggest that you have a look at Durex condoms, not only do they have different coloured front-faced print they also have cute little inked icons of the fruit at the back. If printing in different colours or adding extra stamped icons is too costly then you should probably opt for a larger print or a different font, perhaps even bold the word to make it stand out.

Hopefully you take my suggestions into consideration for those who want to know what they are getting; anyhow I’ll be looking forward to a new design in the not too distant future.

Yours truly;

Lisa Chan

10:01 pm: lisakura

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SO… While doing my poster, I realised that the Marquis condoms are labeled on each packet which flavour! See if you can spot it! -__- I think I’m going to keep the black and white poster.

09:25 pm: lisakura

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Poster Installation in the Readings Cinemas Public Toilets.

I have decided that this one will be my Final Poster, I have printed out both posters and this one is more simple and more eye catching. Also the other image is too busy although it is more colourful. Both images are just as good anyways.

09:00 pm: lisakura

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Final Poster Design

Final Poster Design

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After spending hours on the locating the Font I think got it right hopefully. I’ve been looking at this image for too long and I can’t tell if my poster looks good or bad. It gets the point through though, comparing the two brands of condoms. Here I am saying that the MarQuis Condoms are boring because of their over printed packaging and one colour where as Durex have it simple and straight forward. Besides all the unrelevant details shud be printed on the box packaging. I just want to know what flavour I’m getting at the end of the day.

08:33 pm: lisakura

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Six Drawings
Well at the start where I had aready gone to class and started drawing my object which I choose a trench coat. Then a few weeks go by and I really didnt want to draw this, Firstly I did the very quick line drawings in class and they looked shit. (I’ve only included one in here, the rest in the collage bit are done in ink) I spent 1 hour on a technical drawing of the coat and decided it looked kinda odd.. and I wanted to be abstract but make it all…. WOW it was cool when I imagined it but I realised that when drawing garment it looks best with gesture drawing as it is fast and captures the essence of the body and also shows slight movement. So all of these are drawn quickly as you can see except for the obivious which I had chosen for my detail shot.

Six Drawings


Well at the start where I had aready gone to class and started drawing my object which I choose a trench coat. Then a few weeks go by and I really didnt want to draw this, Firstly I did the very quick line drawings in class and they looked shit. (I’ve only included one in here, the rest in the collage bit are done in ink) I spent 1 hour on a technical drawing of the coat and decided it looked kinda odd.. and I wanted to be abstract but make it all…. WOW it was cool when I imagined it but I realised that when drawing garment it looks best with gesture drawing as it is fast and captures the essence of the body and also shows slight movement. So all of these are drawn quickly as you can see except for the obivious which I had chosen for my detail shot.

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Detail Shot Technical drawing

Detail Shot Technical drawing

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Possible images for the detailed shot

06:45 pm: lisakura

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Hell Extream Close up View

Hell Extream Close up View

06:42 pm: lisakura

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So here are my two final shots of the Word Hell. I ditched the initial idea just because I didnt want to experiment in that awkard area. Besides I think this is a much more approriate approach to relate to hells pizza. Using a metal fork and using wire to ‘thread’ the word hell. It probably just me but this reminds me of those bad resturants you go to and find random bits of wire/plastic/mic things in food… And seeing wire on the fork makes me cringe, also reminds me of the scratchy sound it makes agains bowls and plates. Hmm so why not just opt for Hells pizza instead!

So here are my two final shots of the Word Hell. I ditched the initial idea just because I didnt want to experiment in that awkard area. Besides I think this is a much more approriate approach to relate to hells pizza. Using a metal fork and using wire to ‘thread’ the word hell. It probably just me but this reminds me of those bad resturants you go to and find random bits of wire/plastic/mic things in food… And seeing wire on the fork makes me cringe, also reminds me of the scratchy sound it makes agains bowls and plates. Hmm so why not just opt for Hells pizza instead!

06:42 pm: lisakura

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Practise. cliché hmm…

02:36 am: lisakura